Sep 20 Haiku-Lights


On;Off;On;Off

the lights go, as I

while away my time.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Spotlights on

center-stage me

weak are my knees

 

 

 

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26 thoughts on “Sep 20 Haiku-Lights

  1. Won’t it sound better as

    spotlight on
    I take centre stage
    weak are my knees

    The thought behind both are wonderful, I think execution wise I’ve seen better from you my friend 🙂

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