Sep 26 Haiku- Paperboat


Tires screeching

water splashed

my paperboat sunk.

 

 

 

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19 thoughts on “Sep 26 Haiku- Paperboat

  1. This haiku is really interesting, because it could easily be taken as a disappointed child, noticing that his or her toy has been ruined…but at the same time it could be a metaphor for some fragile thing which someone loves, which was destroyed in an accident or something. I really like that double sense!

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